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 Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:25 am

Since this is focusing more on the sealing part, you'll have to sacrifice the strength of the initial waves. However, I have a question first. Those who are trapped in the orb. Are they able to move within the orb and are they able to escape it? If they can, then there is no need for my first sentence.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:32 am

Yes, they are able to move and escape from inside the orb, unless they cant swim or have inability to move underwater, but the orb will normally stay where it was placed. The orb is just a big ball of water, not water prision jutsu x 10.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:45 am

Alrighty. Then that jutsu is: approved. 200,000 Ryo + 2,500 word training topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 06, 2014 9:29 pm

I should have enough to buy it, I have 105,000 ryo (And 5 chakra) from fw that hasn't been added to my account.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 06, 2014 9:46 pm

Ryo deducted. (Chakra added as well.)
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Sat Feb 15, 2014 1:49 am

Name: Sealing Technique: Iron Chain Dance
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Fuinjutsu
Duration: 14 posts
Cooldown: 20 posts
Description: One of the most revered and well known sealing jutsus. This technique summons multiple chakra chains that can come from any direction or even all directions. They appear out of thin air or from the very ground and move very quick (10 chains at 75 mph), extremely difficult to dodge, especially for the larger targets. They then attach to the users body and usually wrap around. They chains are easily able to restrain even a bijuu-sized creature and several ninja, able to bring them to their knees with the user able to increase and decrease pressure. but the jutsu also has a drawback. The user is also binded by chains after a short time delay of 1 post (his chains are unable to increase or decrease in strength) they don't come off unless his enemy escapes or the user deactivates the jutsu. Several A jutsu or an S rank jutsu can break the chains and release the jutsu.


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Name:Water Prison Shark Dance Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: As long as the users inside a water source (Max 50 meter diameter)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 5 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description:The user activates the jutsu and then actss as the centre of the body of water. Once this technique has been activated, the water alters its position and creates a dome around the user in order to reflect the direction of his movements, making it difficult for targets to escape as long as the user continues pursuit. This technique provides a tremendous field advantage for those who have the ability to breathe and freely move underwater, while others continues to drown as they attempt to futilely escape the large body of water. This technique is extremely effective in one on one fights, but the user would probably not be able to contain two enemies fleeing in opposite directions.

Name: Jūha Reppū Shō (Beast Tearing Gale Palm)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Fuuton
Range: Short to Mid Range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 9 posts
Description: This technique is somewhat of an enhanced version of the Beast Tearing Palm. It uses chakra, infusing it into a condensed and mass amount of wind to form a massive demonic-like claw extending from the user's hand to strike and grab a target, as well as deflect any weapon or attack (weapons below A; only Raiton and Katon jutsu below A). The extending claw also carries tremendous force that can devastate anything in its path without affecting the user, making it useful for dislodging solid and heavy objects.

Name: Sealing Technique: Iron Chain Waltz
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 25 meters
Specialty: Fuinjutsu
Duration: 7 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description: A weaker version of the Chain Dance. It summons several chakra chains(7) from seemingly out of nowhere to bind the target down and attaches to the targets skin. Its able to hold a bijuu down for 2 posts at max but is able to hold down regular people for the full duration. Unlike Its superior, this jutsu doesn't bind the user down as well, but the chains are much weaker and far more susceptible to being broken. B to S rank jutsu can break the chains and release the jutsu.


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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Sat Feb 15, 2014 10:29 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:58 am

Yo son, I'm here to make you struggle with these here jutsu, ya ready? Let's go.

Sealing Technique: Iron Chain Dance

  • So the purpose is just restriction? Nothing else?
  • I'm aware it's able to restrain a bijuu (and Bijuu are strong) However if an outside force were trying to break the chains... So strength of the chains? Against Jutsu as well.
  • Can the user move while both parties are binded?
  • How many at the max?

    Water Prison Shark Dance Technique
  • How large?
  • If the user also can't breathe underwater is it possible for him/her to drown as well?
  • Can trapped users still use jutsu inside the dome?
  • How fast can the user "pursue" while maintaining the dome?

    Jūha Reppū Shō (Beast Tearing Gale Palm)
  • Damage against opponents?
  • I saw extends. Speed of extension?
  • How far can it extend from the user's position, sadly "short to mid range" won't do.
  • Strength of the grip?
  • Can the user move while using this technique?

    Sealing Technique: Iron Chain Waltz
  • Speed?
  • Can the chains be broken by weapons of any kind?
  • Amount of chains?

    Explosive Water Shockwave:
  • We'll wait for a verdict from an Admin or above.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 17, 2014 8:00 am

Stepping in for a second. You can't choose S-ranks for your extra free jutsu. The S-rank would need to be purchased and trained.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 17, 2014 8:17 pm

Spoiler:
 
1.Yup
2.Added
3.Nope
4. 10 sound alright?
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1.?
2.Yup
3.Yup
4.Depends on how fast the person can swim
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From Database
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1. Same as Dance
2. If they equal A or S in power, sure.
3.How bout 7?
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 17, 2014 11:12 pm

Water Prison Shark Dance Technique

  • I'm asking how big this trap is.

    Jūha Reppū Shō (Beast Tearing Gale Palm)
  • Well it is flawed so I shall take it upon myself to fix it. I'll take the heat, so make le edits.
  • Everything else seems good, add it all in.


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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 17, 2014 11:20 pm

Well, its as big as the water source allows. It has to use preexsisting water, the jutsu doesn't create its own. Ill add Max size tho
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Wed Feb 19, 2014 3:26 am

Name: Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu (Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu)
Rank: B
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short to Long
Description: This technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. If damage is dealt directly, the dragon has the same force as a spear thrown with enough force to pierce through iron. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the ninja's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is any water. The amount of water used depends on the skill of the ninja using it. The basic, standard size is 30 ft. It can maximize 100 ft if the user is around enough water. The larger the dragon, the harder it is to dodge. Handseals. Cooldown of 4 posts.

Special Jounin if their primary element is water, can create the dragon without any water around only ONCE. Jounin and up for everyone else still, only ONCE.

If a ninja were to maximize the size of the dragon, here is what is required per rank. An ocean for chuunin. A lake for Special Jounin without water as primary. A river for Jounin and Special Jounin with primary element being water. Can create at maximum size only once without any water around. The next attempt needs a river.

Name: Three Symbols Seal
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Range: Short
Duration: Forevers? Till broken or unsealed, weakens during near-death experiences and pregnancy.
Cooldown: 3 per topic (Each with individual chakra cost)
Description: The sealing formula is used to seal any target into a human body or an object, and is mainly used when a giant enemy or evil spirit needs to be sealed away. To use it, it is necessary for the user to have great ability in seals. (S-Ranks Only) The larger the beasts, the more seals you have to stack up on each other, bijuu take at least two. The beasts or spirit must be restrained before hand. The user is able to stack up most three of the seal, making a 9 symbol seal.



EDIT:Edited Chain Dance(Has yet to be purchased) for 1 post delay before User is binder as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Sun Feb 23, 2014 6:05 pm

Water Prison Shark Dance Technique
  • Decrease the duration by half.
  • Add the previous edits.

    Jūha Reppū Shō (Beast Tearing Gale Palm)
  • Add Previous edits.

    Sealing Technique: Iron Chain Waltz
  • Your suggestions and responses to this seem fine, add those in.

    Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu (Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu)

  • Database justu. Pre-approved

    Three Symbols Seal
  • With the possibility of sealing a bijuu this would be an S rank jutsu. Either remove that potential or be prepared to find another free jutsu.
  • If someone was to interrupt the sealing of let's say a bijuu (Stopping them at 1 seal) can the beast resist the jutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Sun Feb 23, 2014 6:21 pm

Name: Sealing Technique: Iron Chain Waltz
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 25 meters
Specialty: Fuinjutsu
Duration: 7 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description: A weaker version of the Chain Dance. It summons several chakra chains from seemingly out of nowhere to bind the target down and attaches to the targets skin. Its able to hold a bijuu down for 2 posts at max but is able to hold down regular people for the full duration. Unlike Its superior, this jutsu doesn't bind the user down as well, but the chains are much weaker and far more susceptible to being broken. A and S rank jutsu can break the chains and release the jutsu.


1) I was told to tell you to make it breakable by B-S rank force and Jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Sun Mar 02, 2014 1:08 am

Edited in fixes for all cept 3-Symbols.
Well, thing is, each seal costs A-Rank chakra. Meaning three would cost 120 chakra, 2=80, 1=40.
I also should have made a table to show how strong each stack is. A bijuu would cost 3 seals, weak spirits would be 1 and everything in between would be 2. If the seal were to be interrupted before the necessary amount is placed, then the the target would break out no problem. Also, if the target for the sealing breaks out of its restraints, then the sealing can't occur.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Sun Mar 02, 2014 1:26 am

The primary issue with the 3-symbol seals is that Bijuu sealing is S-rank here. It always has been. We can get that jutsu approved later on when I will unlock the ability to get Bijuu IC. The things you have set for it are fine, but like I said right now, the ability to take Bijuu and seal it in oneself or another IC isn't possible.

However, you can make an inverse of it and make a jutsu that removes the Bijuu from its host and sets it free.You can app it and we can look it over. But for now, this one has to be put on the backburner until we unlock the IC stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Fri Mar 07, 2014 10:20 pm

Well, aside from the symbol seal, everything else good for le approval?
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Wed Mar 19, 2014 5:43 am

So besides Three Symbol Seal, those approved now?
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Wed Mar 19, 2014 10:38 pm

If you edited like I told you to sun .-., then yes dey be approved, except 3 symbol.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Thu May 22, 2014 1:41 am

5/5 Freebies
Name: Hiding with Camouflage Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description:This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body (Clothes and weapons included) with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert manoeuvres but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills, except for particularly adept users, who can completely erase even their chakra signature with it. User is unable to use jutsu during the technique. If a jutsu is used, Invisibility is deactivated immediately.


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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Fri May 23, 2014 6:19 pm

Le bump plz
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon May 26, 2014 1:14 am

Hiding with Camouflage Technique
  • This jutsu seems fine, but naturally you seem to have forgotten about clothing & items on the person- describe how exactly this jutsu would affect your apparel.
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon May 26, 2014 2:10 am

Uhm, Fixed it now I guess?
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PostSubject: Re: Hozuki, Saizo Jutsu Registration   Mon May 26, 2014 4:03 am

Looks good. Approved. You may add it to your jutsu list.
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