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PostSubject: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Mon Oct 14, 2013 2:56 am

5 Free
E-Rank:
 

D Ranks:
 

C-Rank:
 


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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Mon Oct 14, 2013 9:46 pm

Bunshin is a jutsu that is auto-added. Please make a custom one and add Bunshin, Kawarimi, and Henge to your list. After you make your custom E-rank, bump. :)
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Fri Oct 18, 2013 3:37 am

Juss give me the bears already, oh and bump or whatever, threw in some silly thingy in there or something.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Fri Oct 18, 2013 4:01 am

Approved, mah boi.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Fri Feb 14, 2014 3:21 am

5 free extra:

Name: Twin Blaze Destruction
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon & Fuuton
Range: 25 ft
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 5
Description: The user release a combo of a wind tornado and adds fire into the mix cause a giant flaming tornado. The tornado once launched only heads in the direction it was launched in. The Tornado can move up to 15 MPH, the tornado it self spins at about 23 MPH, also the twister it self is about 33 feet and the top of it is 48 inches in diameter. If the opponent is caught in the twister or if they get too close then they will be repeatedly be attacked by wind slashes that cause 3 inch deep gashes and or small fire slashes that cause first degree burns unless he/she can escape or until the jutsu runs out. The jutsu can only last but so long about 1 posts and has a cooldown 5 in between.

Name: Cielo Battalion
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Element: Fuuton
Range:
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 8 Posts
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description: This was a technique created by the legendary Aeneas in honor of his former village later discovered by Xavier. This technique causes the user’s body to serve as a wind conductor for one whole post. This causes everything in a 5 meter radius to be blown back, and when this move is complete, the immense winds begin to manifest itself around the user’s body in the form of a white chakra coat which will cover the user from head to toe. This coating gives the user a Ninjutsu and Taijutsu advantage by increasing the force of impact (STR) and speed of the user by 1 rank of his/her normal capabilities. This gives the user a Ninjutsu advantage by absorbing half the damage done by Ninjutsu (Reduces the strength of the jutsu by 1 rank, able to do this successfully twice per topic) and also allows the user to compress chakra from the coating into a palm sized ball that can be shot out up to 5 meters, to hit an opponent with great force,blowing them back and causing damage. This coating lasts 8 posts and requires one post charge up.

Name: (Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: Long
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Until contact is made.
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user emits lighting from there hand and forms it into a spear. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies. The spear is 6 ft in length and when thrown can travel at a max speed of 28 mph. If the spear makes contact with its target the area hit will begin to go numb and wont be usuable for 4 posts. Once thrown the spear can not be directed unless the user catches it and throws it into another direction. The spear can split into 3 different spears each time used has a cooldown of 6 posts.


Name: Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon [Manga]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Fuuton
Range: 25 ft
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: The user swings their sword in a single, large, crescent moon-shaped arc, launching a wind crescent at that target(s) which occurs with such ferocious velocity that the technique can be employed in situations where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously, it only covers the area in front of the user, can deflect D rank fire and C rank of everything else.

Name: Cloud Style: Flame Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon [Manga]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon
Range:
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description:  After charging up their chakra, The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, such as Atsui, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously. {on contact 1st degree burns and temporary numbness in that are for 2 posts}.

Not free:

Name: Cero Oscuras
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Offensive
Element: Katon
Range: 35 ft
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 8 Posts
Description: After a 1 post charge time the user will be able to release a large laser like attack at there opponent from either the palm of there hand or from one of there fingers. After firing the beam travels for 15 of the 35 feet before expanding into its larger form. The color depends on the user (Xavier's is black and cerulean blue).The speed of the jutsu is around 45 mph giving the initial impact of the attack the pain of getting run over by a rhino at half speed. The attack is strong enough to cause 1st to 2nd degree burns on contact. twice per topic use 8 post cool down.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sat Feb 15, 2014 4:07 am

Twin Blaze Destruction - gashes are fine but lower burns to 1 degree

Cielo Battalion - you probably copypasted this, but it needs to be nerfed considerably. x4 spe and str is more op than my lra so tak it down a few pegs. also, change the stuff about aeneas to say that the tech was made famous by him. needs to be past tense since hes dead. and take out the last 2 sentences.

Cloud Style: Crescent Moon Beheading - approved

Cloud Style: Flame Beheading - approved

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear - in the duration explain what you mean 'until contact is made' please

bump when done. you may need someone else to look t over too. im doing this in between fits.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Mon Feb 17, 2014 12:35 am

Edits made.

False Darkness Spear: "Until contact is made". Until it hits something.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Mon Feb 17, 2014 12:55 am

Free Jutsu

Xavier wrote:
This coating gives the user a Ninjutsu and Taijutsu advantage by increasing the force of impact and speed of the user by 2x his/her normal capabilities.

Simply state that while the jutsu is activated, STR and SPE are increased by 1 rank. I can't allow more than that since this is only B-rank.

Twin Blaze Destruction - Approved.

Gian Yari - Approved.




Not Free

Cero Oscuras - Approved. 120,000 Ryo + 2,000 word training topic
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Mon Feb 17, 2014 4:13 am

GIVE ME THE 2x WOMAN!......... Kidding

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Feb 23, 2014 6:25 pm

Just going to throw out a bump for Cielo.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Feb 23, 2014 8:17 pm

Cielo Battalion - One last thing. The 5% absorption thing doesn't work very well anymore. Can you either take that out or word it differently so that it makes sense according to the current system?
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Thu Feb 27, 2014 7:08 am

Edited.
DaPimpMasta wrote:
(Reduces strength by 1 rank, able to do this successfully twice per topic)
Acceptable or nah?
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Thu Feb 27, 2014 10:17 am

Clarify that it is "strength of the jutsu by 1 rank" pretty please and then I believe this will be ready for a full stamp.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Tue Apr 08, 2014 11:19 pm

Alrighty done gone and dids the stuffs madame.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Wed Apr 09, 2014 12:17 am

And approved. 'Bout dayum time, boi. :)   
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Jul 06, 2014 7:32 pm

Spoiler:
 
Capricorn:
 


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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Fri Jul 18, 2014 5:13 am

Annnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnd this too shall be given a dot of a dot of a bump
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Nov 09, 2014 3:27 am

July 8th -> November 8th. Believe that's well within the means for a bump.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Thu Nov 27, 2014 1:49 am

Name:Zodiac Release: Diving into the Nile, Reversal of Fortune (Astrological)

- Alright lets begin. Does this tornado have any suction capabilities? Does your character actually spin or is it just the pure chakra? It should only be able to reflect offensive type jutsu. If it is lower rank reflection can be done with out a problem. same rank you should take a 25% of the damage and is reflected back to the foe with the same force and damage capability. If A rank you should take 50% of the damage and cost 10 more chakra to reflect, reflects back at foe with 50% of the force and at 50% damage capability. and S rank breaks through. that's how i see it fair. What preparations must you make to indicate that this technique is being used? Do you do hand seals?


Name: Zodiac Release: Rings of Saturn, Chakra Explosive Wave (Planetary)

- How much damage can the orb take? does it float or do you have to have a hand on it? Do you load this, what preparations take place to indicate that this technique is about to be in use? 20 yards is too far keep it at 35ft like you intended. How fast are the three rings when theyre blasted?  how big are the rings?


Name:Zodiac Release Synastry

- I like this technique i wouldnt have much of a problem with it. Im saying right off the bat, theres no way this technique is op but i dont think eden would let me approve this. so Ill talk it out with either her or semasu. But if it was approvable heres what id want you to change. Since its B rank the max chakra that they can pull from you is 30 not 40 and the difference would come from the actually caster's chakra pool.  Also for this to work itll require alot of focus so unless you are physically connected with the person youre channeling your chakra too, youd have to be standing still and facing their general direction.


Name: Zodiac Release: Astrological Conquest

This technique can not be both offensive and defensive. It would be nearly unavoidable because body flicker is a move that is near instantaneous for the purpose of evading or getting from one place to another at near teleport speed.  But this is salvageable, make it so that it works just like body flicker but there is a two second delay before you can  attack. Still giving you a chance to take an opponent by surprise but giving them a chance to dodge. Also this technique needs to have negative effects on your body, and its gotta be more than fatigue because the actual body flicker technique can only be used once per topic. this one her can be used more than once per post, which leads to another thing. Make it once per post for four posts that way you will have to pick and choose when you flicker. Also needs hand seals.


Name: Zodiac Release: Cardinal Sin
- Make this an A rank technique and bump up the duration to four posts


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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Nov 30, 2014 9:56 pm

Diving Into the Nile:

  • No, the tornado doesn't have any suction capabilities.
  • "the user covers their body in chakra. They spin like a tornado". The user spins.
  • Well I would assume that's what defensive would mean, to deflect and protect against offensive attacks.
  • That seems pretty fair, I'll adjust it accordingly.
  • It's chakra charge in place of handseals.


Rings of Saturn:

  • I would say it can withstand up to it's rank in damage, 2 C or 3 D.
  • In hand or floats within arms reach of the user.
  • I suppose I can add handseals.
  • 35ft is the distance the orb can travel once launched though, that specified range doesn't include the rings.
  • I'd say maybe 20 mph?.
  • It states it's thickness.


Synastry:

  • I'll make the change after Eden looks over the concept


Astrological Conquest:

  • Added the edits.
  • Drawbacks besides fatigue would include what? I added tunnel vision but besides that nothing would really happen to the user. Sure multiple body flickers is difficult to deal with but with the limits you've set on it I wouldn't know what draw backs to give it.
  • It already says handseals are required


Cardinal Sin:

  • Done.
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Fri Dec 12, 2014 12:33 am

I'll throw a bump out as well
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Thu Jan 15, 2015 4:22 am

:D Bump and stuff cause y'know..... Impatience?
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Thu Jan 15, 2015 2:56 pm

Every question that i asked you about, find some way to write it into the description so that everyone will know by reading the technique and not only by the conversation in this thread. Let me know when you added that and ill tell you whats next
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Jan 25, 2015 9:10 pm

I already edited it to match your questions ya bum. :p
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PostSubject: Re: [Xavier Deventris][Jutsu Registration]   Sun Feb 08, 2015 1:44 pm

Tis a one of dem bumps
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