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PostSubject: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 1:36 am



Soft Explosion
Custom
Speciality: Ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Duration: 1 post
Cool down: 4 posts
Effects: The user breathes Bakuton chakra, which is invisible to the naked eye, naked eye meaning normal eyes. Jutsu that allows an opponent to see chakra like sharingan and byakugan will be able to see this jutsu. The chakra is breathed outward by the user in close proximity to an opponent. This must be inhaled to damage internal organs & cause 2nd degree burns to the outer skin.

Name: Fast Travel
Custom/Cannon: Custom
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: E
Cool down:2 posts
Duration: 2 posts
Effects: Used only for movement. It harmlessly pushes the user in whatever direction he chooses in one direction by the use of an explosion.

Shindosachi [Shock Touch]
Canon/Custon: Canon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Duration: 1 post but can be sustained for 5 extra chakra per turn
Cooldown: 2 posts
Effects: A technique which acts similarly how one can channel static electricity through a person by merely contacting them, this move consists electrifying the user's chakra throughout the body and projecting it upon touching an opponent, sending a jolt of electricity through their body, painfully attacking via the nerves. This jutsu may be maintained.

Name: Sudden Noise
Canon/Custom: Custom
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Duration: 1 post
Cool down: 2 post cool down, user can charge up to 3 objects before the cool down is initiated.
Effects: Allows the user to infuse an object the size of a kunai/shuriken with bakuton chakra. When an opponent tries to block or evade the projectile, the user activates the chakra in the object to cause the explosion. This has a 1st degree burn effect and can damage eardrums

Name: Raiton: Juudenki [Charger]
Canon/Custom: Canon
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Duration: 1 posts
Cooldown: 2 posts
Effects: An electrical technique that sends a surge of electricity through the body, causing mild pain through the nervous system. The purpose of this is to force the body to be aware, giving pain in order to "Re-start" the system. This is useful for preventing the body from falling unconscious, assisting one when disoriented, and aiding in concentration. This effect does not break genjutsus, though depending on the illusion may aide them in resisting it.

DOTON

Name: Doton: Dochuu Eigyo (Earth Release: Underground Submarine Voyage)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: After the required handseals, the user can sink into the ground and travel through the earth. After the jutsu is used, the user can freely move through the earth. The user must emerge again either the same post or the next one. The opponent can sense the user's location through normal chakra sensing, though it takes a sensor to pinpoint the exact location. The cooldown is one post after the technique is used.

Name: Doton: Doryuu Taiga (Earth Release: Earth Flow River)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: After the required handseals, the user turns the ground beneath the target into a river of mud. The river will start under the opponent's feet and will expand for a few meters. The river is three meters wide. If the opponent gets caught in the river, he or she will be stuck, bound by the sticky mud. After the jutsu stops advancing, all that is left is a motionless pool of mud. It cannot uproot trees or affect terrain at a large scale. The cooldown is two posts after the technique is used.

Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes a 10 meter x 10 meter area of the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. While not necessarily causing death, this jutsu does cause extreme pain and can cause suffocation if not evaded or escaped within the time allotted. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. The rate at which the earth folds in upon itself depends on the user, and leaves the enemy with a set time to escape based on the user's rank:

Genin - 2 m/s, 5 seconds for enemy to evade
Chuunin - 3.5 m/s, 3 seconds for enemy to evade
Special Jounin - 5 m/s, 2 seconds for enemy to evade
Jounin - 7.5 m/s, 1.5 seconds for enemy to evade
Kage - 10 m/s, 1 second for enemy to evade

If the attack does successfully entrap the opponent, crushing force is dealt, resulting in hairline fractures upon most of the bones, which cause some the movement of the enemy to be hampered by 10%. This effect is stackable, so if the opponent is caught in the technique twice, they will have 20% movement speed deducted. In order to escape from the snare of earth, the opponent must use a D-rank raiton or any other C-rank technique or higher in order to disrupt the flow of chakra through the earth. (4 post cooldown)

Name: Raiton: Jibashi [Electromagnetic Murder]
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Defensive, Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 6 Feet in front of the user.
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: This technique is a close-range jutsu that consists of focusing electrified chakra to the palm of the user's hand, condensing it until the jutsu is utilized. Upon usage, the stored electricity will spray forward randomly, striking anything near the spray of lightning, deflecting projectiles, striking foes, and defending the user from earth-based techniques. If the target is within a foots distance he or she will suffer minimal electrical burns on contact with each separate bolt. About 30 tiny bolts are made and they shoot out about 6 feet out from the user. At close range the bolts can tear through rock but as they separate they lose strength only cause numbing on impact. If caught up close the bolts would cause deep tissue damage and numbness lasting for 2 posts, but if only caught by straw bolt slight numbness at impact point would occur for only 1 post.

If the tiny bolts pass through water or moisture, then their electrical current will travel through the body of water and moisture, shocking everything within it's radius, even the user if no careful. Those caught in that current are shocked and stunned for 3 posts, causing minor first degree burns on the spot of direct impact.


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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 2:03 am

Please follow this amount- no more, no less.

The Academy E Rank jutsu are free & learned automatically. The two E Ranks are for other things like customs & etc. As for custom jutsu, please make those now. Otherwise, once these jutsu are approved, you will have to buy & train any jutsu after the starting jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 3:51 am

i made adjustments there in the post semasu
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 4:08 am

E Fast Travel- This needs a proper duration & cooldown. 2 post maximum and 2 post cooldown. Also, an explosion can't be silent.

D Raiton: Denryuu [Earth Flash]- State this has a 1st degree burn effect and can damage eardrums. This needs a 2 post cooldown, but state you can charge up to 3 objects before the cooldown is initiated.

C Soft Explosion- This kind of jutsu isn't a duration technique. It should be 1 post duration with 4 post cooldown. State this must be inhaled to damage internal organs & cause 2nd degree burns to the outter skin.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 4:40 am

made the suggested changes. awaiting verdict.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 4:44 am

E Fast Travel- You still haven't changed this one

Also in your jutsu templates, the element is Bakuton, not Bakujutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 4:53 am

yea and those mistakes were just from editing i missed. *sigh* i apologize.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 4:55 am

I approve, just need another approval
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jan 27, 2015 2:41 pm


  • Soft Explosion: I see a couple of loop holes within this jutsu. A.) It does not state whether the user breathes the bakuton in or out. For any unfair role players, they could take advantage of this and declare that you have just inhaled your own deadly Bakuton jutsu, causing damage to yourself. Please state whether the user breaths in or out. B.) I wish for you to state that those with Kekkei Genkai such as the Sharingan or the Byakugan can see the Bakuton chakra, because those certain Kekkei Genkai's allow for its user to notice Chakra flow or chakra circulation.

  • Raiton: Jibashi [Electromagnetic Murder]:
    Quote :
    Upon usage, the stored electricity will spray forward randomly, striking anything near the spray of lightning, deflecting projectiles, striking foes, and defending the user from earth-based techniques.


    If it strikes at anything near the spray of lightning, does this mean that the user will also be harmed? Technically, the user will be anything near the spray of lightning, so the user would be at risk themselves if they used this technique. If you do not wish for people to use this technicality against you, I would advise stating whether or not the user will be hurt as well by this jutsu.


Please do not use un-accepted jutsu's in threads. You do not own them yet, so you cannot use them. This is your final warning, I will give no more.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Wed Jan 28, 2015 3:42 am

I have updated my last grading post.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Wed Jan 28, 2015 5:45 pm

Raiton: Jibashi [Electromagnetic Murder]- This is n accepted jutsu in our jutsu encyclopedia. The second paragraph states that it CAN affect the user IF water is involved- going by the context of the implied words; this jutsu CANNOT hurt the user unless another medium such as water is used.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Wed Jan 28, 2015 7:15 pm

ok. well yes it would be over powered if it were a truly invisible chakra that was used. so i will specify that abilties like sharingan and byakugan that allows a user to see chakra will still be able to see the chakra being breathed out. and yes the chakra isnt breathed out. as for the warning and all that, i do apologize. for some reason i got all excited when it was approved by one staff member. i wil take the warning into effect.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Wed Jan 28, 2015 7:33 pm

I apporove these jutsu. You may use it as you wish.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 09, 2015 3:02 pm

Name: Just a touch
Custom/Cannon: Custom
Specialty: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: C
Cool down: 2 posts
Duration: 1 posts
Effects: This jutsu is very simple, but if used correctly it can give an advantage in battle to the user. If the user manages to touch the victim it allowes the user to place the chakra within the victim. The chakra inside the victim is then activated at the user's will to explode causing the touched body part to explode. The explosion causes internal damage.((staff will also decide how this is going to happen)). Of course, normally, the victim would be unable to detect the chakra within them unless they have some sort of means of detecting such things via a jutsu or otherwise.

Name: Bakuton Armour
Custom/Cannon: Custom
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: C at Gennin, B at Chuunin, A at jounin, S at Sannin or Kage rank
Cool down:
Duration: ((well, its armor so idk how this works staff will decide i suppose.))
Effects: The difference in the jutsu with the rank has only to do with the defensive capabilities of the armor. At all ranks, this armor makes the user immune to explosive jutsu. The user can place this armor on two allies so they can be protected from his chakra. Chuunin the user can protect four people. At Jounin, he can protect six people and at Kage he can protect ten people. As for normal defense, when the user is struck physically; does not matter how brief the contact is, either by taijutsu or with weapons of any kind, the armor allows the user to incorporate his 'Just a Touch' jutsu and transfer his explosive chakra through this way as well resulting in the same effect. This armor does not protect the user from attacks from opponents, but it is used rather just to protect the user from explosions and as a medium for his explosive chakra.

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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:36 pm

Name: Just a touch
Custom/Cannon: Custom
Specialty: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: C
Cool down: 2 posts
Duration: 1 posts
Effects: This jutsu is very simple, but if used correctly it can give an advantage in battle to the user. If the user manages to touch the victim it allowes the user to place the chakra within the victim. The chakra inside the victim is then activated at the user's will to explode causing the touched body part to explode. The explosion causes internal damage. Of course, the victim would be unable to detect the chakra within them unless they have some sort of means of detecting such things via a jutsu or otherwise.

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Name: Bakugear
Custom/Cannon: Custom
Specialty: Nintaijutsu
Element: Bakuton
Rank: C
Cool down:
Duration: ((both cool down and duration will have to be decided by staff since its armor.))
Effects: This jutsu grows out from the user's body in an instant covering the entire body unseen by the naked eyes, being those who do not posses doujutsu that can see chakra. This jutsu cannot stop or lessen the damage of jutsu above its rank. So to a stronger opponent, their attacks happen without obstruction. This jutsu however can be used as a medium to transfer explosive chakra to an opponent in battle when they have contact with it via weapons or their body. This part is a passive ability. The real purpose of this armor is that it makes the user and his allies immune to Bakuton jutsu. At Genin rank he can create the said armor on one other person, as chuunin, three other people, as a Jounin he can protect five people and ten people at Sannin or kage level. It allows the user to use 'Just a touch' as a medium to that jutsu. When the armor when attacked, it can cause explosions strong enough to cause 3rd degree burns and severe damage to the ear drums.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Mon Feb 09, 2015 9:46 pm

Is there a reason why you have posted these two jutsu twice? Also, you are not following the proper jutsu temple, I will give you the exemplified jutsu template. It is self-explanatory, so please don't omit parts of the template when making jutsu.

Name: (What is the name of your jutsu?)
Canon/Custom: (Is the jutsu canon or custom?)
Rank: (What rank is your jutsu?)
Type: (Offensive, Defensive or Supplementary?)
Element: (What element is required for the jutsu?)
Range: (What is the range of your jutsu?)
Specialty: (What specialty does this jutsu require?)
Duration: (If your jutsu has a duration please state it here.)
Cooldown: (What is the cooldown of your jutsu?)
Description: (What exactly does the jutsu do? Explain in great detail the effects, advantages, as well as any disadvantages of the jutsu. Details are the key to a fast approval.)
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 12, 2015 3:58 am

ok will follow this template.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 12, 2015 7:01 am

Name: Just a touch
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Bakuton
Range: Must touch the opponent
Specialty: Bakuton Chakra
Duration: 1 post
Cool down: 2 posts
Description: This jutsu is very simple, but if used correctly it can give an advantage in battle to the user. There is nothing fancy about this jutsu to give away the true nature of it. It is meant to be subtle. All the opponent may feel is the user touch them. If the user manages to touch the victim it allows the user to place the chakra within the victim. The affected body part erupts from detonation, causing mild internal body damage and 2nd degree burns upon the surface of the skin. Of course, the victim would be unable to detect the chakra within them unless they have some sort of means of detecting such things via a jutsu or otherwise. This chakra stays within the body of the opponent for two posts.
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Name: Bakugear
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: The rank will be according to Shinobi rank, starts off as C.
Type: Defensive
Element: Bakuton
Range: n/a due to it being armor
Specialty: Bakuton Chakra
Duration: 3 posts
Cool down: 4 posts
Description: This jutsu grows out from the user's body in an instant covering the entire body unseen by the naked eyes, being those who do not posses doujutsu that can see chakra. To those that can see it, he would look devoid of a face, hair or any distinguishing traits since he would be covered entirely by the chakra armor. This jutsu cannot stop or lessen the damage of ANY jutsu above its rank, weather it be explosions or otherwise. The growth of this jutsu depends on the rank of the user. So to a stronger opponent, their attacks; taijutsu, genjutsu and ninjutsu happen without ANY obstruction OR resistance of any kind. As for the durability of the armor to explosives, it can withstand ONLY explosives of equal to or less than its rank. This jutsu however can be used as a medium to transfer explosive chakra to an opponent in battle when they have contact with it via their weapons or their body. At Genin rank he can create the said armor on one other person, as chuunin, three other people, as a Jounin he can protect five people and ten people at Sannin or kage level. It allows the user to use 'Just a touch' as a medium to that jutsu. When the armor is attacked, at C rank it will cause an explosion that causes 1st degree burns, at B rank the explosion would cause 2nd degree burns, at A it would cause 3rd degree and at S rank it would cause 4th degree burns. At all ranks the sound of the explosion causes severe damage to the ear drums. Any higher forms of this rank will have to be bought.

As for the durability of the armor, because it is made of the user's chakra, the armor makes him immune to his own bakuton explosive jutsu. However, it can only withstand sword techniques and physical attacks according to the user's present rank. And so, it can withstand a single jutsu of the user's rank or two jutsu of lower rank. Up keep of this armor is 10 chakra per post after the initial post.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Thu Feb 12, 2015 11:45 pm

Just a touch- Please state how long the chakra remains with the opponent.

Bakugear- This is a C Rank technique, so it can't go above 2nd degree, so please change the 3rd degree burns. If this is an armor, how many strikes can it take before it breaks?(Regardless of duration) Not to mention, even if it is an armor: if an explosion is used near you- the kinetic impact would at least knock you back as well. Also, you can't just say this technique protects you and others from all explosions. At most at C Rank, it could protect 2 D Ranks or 1 C Rank explosion. Once edited, we'll go over a duration & cooldown.

Dirt Bomb- This jutsu is fundamentally flawed. First of all- you need a medium to cause any of the rocks or earth to expode, not just from a range unless you were super-charging the particles from a distance(Which would be at least A Rank) Secondly- an explosion wouldn't last for 3 posts, nor would the debris effect last for that long after such a low-ranking explosion, so the duration should only be 1 post. Third- a Fuuton technique or even a strong natural breeze could wash away these debris, this kind of jutsu could not reform itself.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Sat Feb 14, 2015 9:38 am

I edited the 'just a touch' jutsu and placed a time limit for the chakra to be in the opponent's body. I greatly elaborated on the 'bakugear' jutsu and explained it in greater detail explaining that I made the jutsu to grow with my character. it cannot under no circumstance alter the damage that may be done to me. The jutsu only acts as a medium for the 'just a touch jutsu' and protects me from explosions only of my rank and ONLY bakujutsu explosions which i am sure at least 50% of the time will be MY OWN.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Sat Feb 14, 2015 5:18 pm

Just a touch- causing a body part to explode is severely OP, especially for a C Rank. I might suggest re-wording this part to something of the effect of "The affected body part erupts from detonation, causing mild internal body damage and 2nd degree burns"

Bakugear- Like I was saying in my last post. This technique needs a limit on "uses" Such as, when you touch an opponent or an opponent touches your armor. Yes it can be a medium to your other jutsu, but it needs a limit to how many things it could explode. Otherwise essentially, you are getting free jutsu for the duration of this technique. For duration, at C Rank- I recommend 3 posts and a cooldown of 4 posts(Any higher forms of this rank will need to be bought)
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Sat Feb 14, 2015 9:10 pm

Just a touch- causing a body part to explode is severely OP, especially for a C Rank. I might suggest re-wording this part to something of the effect of "The affected body part erupts from detonation, causing mild internal body damage and 2nd degree burns"

^^^^^ totally agree with this one and thanks for the guidance. i appreciate this.


Bakugear- Like I was saying in my last post. This technique needs a limit on "uses" Such as, when you touch an opponent or an opponent touches your armor. Yes it can be a medium to your other jutsu, but it needs a limit to how many things it could explode. Otherwise essentially, you are getting free jutsu for the duration of this technique. For duration, at C Rank- I recommend 3 posts and a cooldown of 4 posts(Any higher forms of this rank will need to be bought)

^^^^^ i believe i said that in the jutsu description that "This jutsu however can be used as a medium to transfer explosive chakra to an opponent in battle when they have contact with it via their weapons or their body." meaning, it CANNOT be transferred via any ninjutsu at all OR coming into contact with ANY ninjutsu and of course no genjutsu. it works only when there is contact via the opponent's weapons or any part of the opponent's body. since the rankujo is a nintaijutsu based clan i do not see why this cannot be allowed.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Sun Feb 15, 2015 6:21 am

Bakugear- Frankly. For the duration of this jutsu, it makes you invulnerable to the limitations of the jutsu. Not including higher ranked techniques. Any physical or sword technique becomes null and is instantly countered by your armor's explosions. You need a limited number of physical strikes this armor is valid for, its duration will end if the maximum number of strikes are dealt before the complete duration is ended. Along with the duration- you need a 10 chakra upkeep per post for the 3 post duration(Duration jutsu are half the rank's cost per post after the initial post)
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Sun Feb 15, 2015 7:17 pm

check out what i put for the durability of the armor.
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PostSubject: Re: Gin's Jutsu Registration   Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:23 pm

Bakugear- Put the up=keep chakra amount of 10 chakra per post after the initial post. make it 2 lower ranked jutsu instead of 3.
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