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 Shinro's Jutsu Registration

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PostSubject: Shinro's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jun 09, 2015 1:26 am

E-Rank
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D-Rank
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C-Rank
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PostSubject: Re: Shinro's Jutsu Registration   Tue Jun 09, 2015 11:56 pm

Accepted. You may add these to your jutsu list and role play these jutsu's.
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PostSubject: Re: Shinro's Jutsu Registration   Thu Jun 11, 2015 8:48 pm

Hello, hello. I will be checking your techniques.

1) Ran'un: Considering the potential damage this technique can cause, as well as the advanced level of control it requires, it is not a D-rank technique. Please increase it to C-rank.

2) Teppōdama: This technique is not Water Release. Water Release is advanced control over the Suiton affinity. Please change the element to just Suiton. Also, this technique cannot gurantee damage. Rewrite the last portion of the technique's description hypothetically. The description also states that Shinro is able to increase the damage and the number of balls of water by increasing his chakra output. If this is the case, then this technique is going to cost more chakra than the conventional C-rank technique. Assuming that this technique initially fires 5 balls of water, it should cost Shinro 5 extra chakra points for every time it increases by 5 (ex. 10 balls of water = 5 extra chakra points; 20 balls of water = 10).

3) Starch Syrup Capture Field: Since this is a Water Release technique, you cannot have it. To reitorate, Water Release is advanced control over Suiton. In order for you to have it, Suiton must be your primary and ONLY element. The only exception to this in the Naruto series was the Mizukage, Mei - and she was a very rare exception.

Please make the changes I mentioned, and you'll be good to go.
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PostSubject: Re: Shinro's Jutsu Registration   Thu Jun 11, 2015 9:52 pm


  • 1) Increased rank / moved from D-ranks to C-ranks

  • 2) The only problem i have is that in the Teppōdama jutsu, you arn't actual gaining more bullets. Instead you are simply splitting the bigger ones into smaller ones. Tho i do agree that there should be a chakra cost for doing so. I have applied change to Element and added chakra cost for splitting as well as changing the damages from will to could

  • 3)Removed Starch Syrup Capture Field
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PostSubject: Re: Shinro's Jutsu Registration   Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:19 pm

You're good to go. Just add the changes to your jutsu list.




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