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PostSubject: Hareegh    Mon Jun 15, 2015 6:37 am

Name: Hareegh
Species: Fire Salamandar
Height: 9 inches
Weight: 2 oz
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Personality: Hareegh is very calm and calculating, as well as extremely loyal. He comes from a long line of pets owned by the Jiin clan and his fate, to be the comrade of the young Michio, was decided far before he was even born. The fire salamanders were initially prized by the family due to rumors that they were one with fire, similar to the red haired of the family, but they were never meant to be shinobi pets. They were used for company, spying on political enemies in the days before the clan came to Hyougagakure, and their secretions which had both poisonous and medicinal uses. He lives on mainly insects.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:45 am

If its Katon based, then whats Katon about it? Its one ability is poison based.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:47 am

I did not actually mean to include the Katon. I put that on there kind of absent mindedly, he has nothing flaming going on. His poison has no element attached to it.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 3:58 am

Well ok, Then remove the Katon and leave that spot blank or put N/A.

His poison from my understanding is only fatal if the body is being pushed, for lack of a better term. Reason why i infer this is because you stated that if they do not get treated or rest within 15 posts then they risk the chance of dying. So what happens if the person isnt exerting soo much energy, will they survive the poison?

How long does the poison last if no energy is being exerted?
How often can this salamander use such a poison? ( This i ask because although some reptiles tend to be quite poisonous in real life, i still need to give everyone a fighting chance in the narutoverse. Cause if i were you id just have that lizard squirm all around the opponents body from within their clothes and then boom i just used a D rank salamander to condemn an S rank ninja. All i got to do is keep him from resting.) So there has to be a limit to how much he can secrete and how often. Keep his rank in mind when answering this.

I am assuming this salamander has no combat experience and can be killed as easily as an average lizard? everything that is not mentioned can be assumed by opponents.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:00 am

He can be killed as easily as a real fire salamander. The literacy is the only unrealistic part about him. And I actually wanted to do find some other way to make the toxin work. That is a real toxin of the animal with no cure that causes respiratory paralysis. It is by time not exertion in the real world, but I don't know how to make that a thing in this site.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:17 am

Well you and your salamander are a bit low rank to be having incurable toxins in your possessions. The real life aspect of such toxins were already noted by me, but still we cant just let that be a thing, or else everyone else would do it to, and now every fight would be a game of keep away.  But imma work with you here. How about this?

1)We make it by Exertion. cause time will make this D rank(lowest rank on our site right now) venom impossible to overcome for everyone that isn't a healer or cant find time to sleep/rest in the middle of a confrontation. The time you've given is fair,and most topics don't last 15 posts now a days but im believing that we are on the road to having 10 page fights soon.

2) The exertion is good because it means that if they do anything more than the basics of walking, talking, and maybe throwing a kunai or two, then they will be exerting energy, which would move them into the proceeding phases of the venom. Like for example: he gets infected, but jon doesnt know and he starts throwing stuff and doing  aerial tricks. he can only do that for two posts, even if the posts arent consecutive before he begin to feel numbness, so on and soo forth. this makes it near impossible for them to die of poisoning but i bet you that if he is smart he will have a post or two where he doesnt do much, creating you an opening to strike.  Otherwise he would over exert and die from the poisoning .

3) Poison can last until the end of the topic, but not forever.

4) Salamander can only affect one limb(regardless if its the same person or not), every 5 posts.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 4:31 am

I made some edits and hope that everything is at least a little bit closer to being up to par!
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 5:03 am

I'm slightly confused, so the poison doesn't effect the user if they do anything that requires less energy than throwing an object? And using a B-Rank Tai/Kenjutsu would speed up the process of the poisoning? Or slow it down?

P.S. you spelled enemy's wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 5:06 am

It would speed up the process.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Tue Jun 16, 2015 5:23 am

Okay, I personally am willing to approve this. It's based off an actual animal, and the side effects are fine.

You have The Approval of Rumi.
Please keep in mind that any Moderator or Administrator that views a detail that would be considered controversial they have every right and power to strip the approval away, at any time, until fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Hareegh    Thu Jun 18, 2015 2:08 pm

Keeping in mind, that this topic and  everything noted will be used as future reference.

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