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 Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}

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PostSubject: Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}   Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:42 am

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}   Sun Jun 28, 2015 8:25 pm

Hey, Shinichi. I'll be checking out your techniques today. But before I begin, note that academy jutsus are already given to you, so you don't have to post them up in your jutsu registration. Body Flicker, Substitution, and Clone technique are automatically a given. You can come up with some more E-ranks and one more D-rank if you'd like. Moving on,


Water Wolf Jutsu: The only issue I have with this technique is the wolves apparent ability to think coherently. Unless they are clones (which actually share a legitimate piece of the user's consciousness), then they cannot attack on their own free will. They can, however, be launched at the opponent; much like Kakashi's lightning hound. If you would like for them to be able do that, please change the description accordingly.

Small Water Wall: It cannot be allowed to block C-rank techniques. Other than that, it's good to go.

Hidden Mist Jutsu: Please change it so that it can completely be blown away by C-rank techniques. Gotta keep things even, know what I mean?

The jutsus aforementioned are the only ones that I found issues with. Other than that, you have my approval on the others. Please bump when you make the changes.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}   Mon Jun 29, 2015 12:28 am

I've made the appropriate changes and made some new D-Rank and E-Rank techniques to replace the other jutsu, thanks for telling me about that. Now, for the Hidden Mist Jutsu it wasn't written by me it's one of the jutsu that are listed in the canon list. That's just copy and pasted over, do you still want me to edit it or leave it be because of that?
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}   Mon Jun 29, 2015 7:25 pm

Hmm, I see. Nah, just leave Hidden Mist the way it is then. It'd be more work than it's worth. Everything looks good, but please specify what you mean when stating that lightning techniques "maximize damage". I understand that it amplifies the water technique, but how so? Does it cause burns? Does it increase a rank in damage? And so on. Once that is done, I'll approve your techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}   Mon Jun 29, 2015 11:58 pm

Appropriate changes have been made.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Shinichi {Jutsu Registration}   Tue Jun 30, 2015 10:46 am

Awesome. Your techniques are officially approved. Enjoy.
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